cell animation
okay so in english in yr 7 we watch this short clip called cell animation, it was a bout a guy, who could paint, but he got arrested and put in a cell, but he then painted a paradise where he was free...i was an animation of course, and it's only the outline of what is was about, but anyway, we then had to write a poem, his is my poem but i've altered one or two words, just to make it flow a bit easier...


Cell Animation
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The stabbing darkness surrounds me,
Pushing the air away from my lungs,
Chocking me soundlessly,
No one can help me.

The loneliness around me makes no noise,
It makes no movement,
It only watches and waits,
I know it is near, but where.

The chilling footsteps coming to release me,
Walk straight past,
Never returning for more then a minute.

The rough blankets draped across my shoulders,
Scratch me, hurting me,
The pain I can stand,
But for how long I don’t know.

The dull foods, that in my world are feasts,
Wander away with my imagination,
I dare not taste the feast for fear,
Fear of finding it as dull, dry food.

The hopes of my heart lie dying,
As cold walls close in preventing escape,
Nowhere to run,
Nowhere to hide.
Trapped.


Unwilling tears fall from pools of loneliness,
Streaking down my face,
Forming puddles at my feet.

The dreading silence surrounds my suffering soul,
Always around,
Day and night,
Never again will I see the light at the end of the tunnel.



the only word that i changed was in the second last stanza, it was the word puddles, it was oriinally pools, i just felt it didn't fit, because i had used it just two lines before....
Until next time...
Jay